I crashed and burned last night. We went to dinner to celebrate my daughter’s birthday and by the time I got home I knew there was no way I would sit another minute at my laptop. LOL So here’s yesterday’s poem. No. I am not depressed. This is more about my past, specifically the time just after I recovered from Cancer.
Memories grip me, pulling me down
A pit of quicksand.
I lay suspended in time,
Lost,
Alone.
I am traitor to life, a gift
Best given to another.
Hearts think otherwise,
Beat regardless,
Reminding me there is a world
Larger than myself. I am but a speck
of dust spinning through
The universe, fighting gravity’s
pull, always playing catch up.
***
Β© Amanda Makepeace
NaPoWriMo 2012
Hearts think otherwise,
Beat regardless,
Reminding me there is a world
Larger than myself. I am but a speck
Love that right there…..lovely!
Thank you!! I’m re-reading that and thinking, wow, did I write that? LOL π
Yeah, I really-really like this piece … you dun good my friend!!! π
“Reminding me there is a world
Larger than myself. I am but a speck
of dust spinning through
The universe, fighting gravityβs
pull …”
You and Adrienne … getting it right! Right on poet-ess Amanda. Spot on. π π π
Thank you!! I need to put my poet-ess hat on now and write today’s poem. hehe π
Wait … I am not sure that I added enough smiley faces??! lol.
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LOL I needed a good giggle!!